Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是武漢大學(xué)的一名新生。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語老師李老師寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對他的感謝。詞數(shù)100左右。

提示：

1．對英語李老師表達(dá)感謝。

2．回顧在校時考試的壓力、堆積如山的作業(yè)和父母的高期望讓你很沮喪，多虧老師的鼓勵和耐心指導(dǎo)，讓你成績提高，終于實現(xiàn)夢想。

3．希望老師的學(xué)生都能進(jìn)入理想大學(xué)。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr Li,

I’m very excited to write this letter to express my gratitude to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. If it had not been for your help, I might not have been admitted by my dream school.

Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. At that time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations from my parents made me depressed. Thanks for your encouragement and guidance, I made progress and achieved my dream finally.

I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Thank you for your help and support again and wish you all the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱作文。要求考生以李華的身份給中學(xué)的英語老師李老師寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對他的感謝。所以本文使用第一人稱和一般過去時的時態(tài)。要點：1.現(xiàn)在是武漢大學(xué)的新生的我很感謝老師對我的幫助。2．回顧在校時考試的壓力、堆積如山的作業(yè)和父母的高期望讓你很沮喪，多虧老師的鼓勵和耐心指導(dǎo)，讓你成績提高，終于實現(xiàn)夢想。3．希望老師的學(xué)生都能進(jìn)入理想大學(xué)。本文所有的要點都已經(jīng)給了出來，寫作的時候一定要注意不能逐句翻譯，要在各要點之間添加適當(dāng)?shù)囊�點讓文章更流暢。建議文章分為三段，各要點自成一段。