Question

假如你是李明，你的班里來(lái)了一位英國(guó)交換生Paul。他在和你的交談中表示在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封信，給他提一些建議。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．請(qǐng)求老師和同學(xué)的幫助。

2．不要總想著考試成績(jī)，要多想自己的進(jìn)步。

3．多進(jìn)行體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。

4．……。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120字左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.  ______________________________________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely                                                                              Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time,which only makes you more stressed out.Instead,you should think about the progress you have made in your study,which will surely increase your own confidence.In addition,I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress,because sports will also help you sleep better at night.As for me,I would like to listen to classic music if I have time.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Yours sincerely                                                                               Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：先讀提示，要點(diǎn)與格式要弄清；時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫(xiě)好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視。學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文訓(xùn)練任務(wù)。最后要檢查（1）要點(diǎn)是否齊全，有無(wú)遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無(wú)缺詞。（3）語(yǔ)法是否正確，人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無(wú)習(xí)語(yǔ)及固定搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循書(shū)信格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。