Question

【題目】假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，從網(wǎng)上獲悉某國際青少年志愿者組織正在全球招募暑期志愿者。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.寫信目的；

2.自我介紹；

3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)l00左右；

2.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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With all my best regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Planning Is Good. But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【解析】試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語apply for申請；in one’s opinion在某人看來；contribute to有助于；look forward to 盼望著；In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.這個句子運用到部分倒裝；In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.這個句子運用到in which引導(dǎo)的定語從句；