Question

9．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面寫出增加的詞；
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉；
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分．
Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．In the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city for so a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．After divided into three groups，we started to work．Some students cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole，put the earth back and pushed them down hard．We continued doing that until all the work was done．Although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文講述了自己在學(xué)校印象最深刻的一次活動(dòng)，在這次活動(dòng)中作者和同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)種土豆．同學(xué)們被分成三組，有的切土豆，有的挖坑，還有的埋土豆．作者和同學(xué)們一直干完，盡管很累，但非常滿足．

解答 Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．
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In the past two and a half years，our school had organized
                                                                 has     
many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called
                                                      most
"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a
                              On
farm whichwe learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city
       where
for so a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．

After∧divided into three groups，we started to work．Some students
       being
cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the

pieces of potatoes into the hole，put the earth back and pushed them
                                       holes                                                 it
down hard．We continued doing that until all the work was done．

Although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home．
                                          去掉but
1．a(chǎn)改為the；考查冠詞，序數(shù)詞third前面要加定冠詞the．
2．had 改為has；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)  In the past two and a half years可知，此處應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．
3．best 改為most；考查副詞，結(jié)合上下文分析句意為"使我印象最深的是學(xué)習(xí)干農(nóng)活"，故用副詞much的最高級(jí)most．
4．In 改為On；考查介詞，具體到在某一天的上文或下午 時(shí)要用介詞on．
5．which改為where；考查定語(yǔ)從句，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為a farm，所以用關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)．
6．so 改為such；so為副詞，修飾形容詞或副詞，such為形容詞，修飾名詞，這里a long time是名詞性短語(yǔ)，故用such．
7．divided前加being；考查動(dòng)詞的語(yǔ)態(tài)，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，暗含主語(yǔ)是"we"，與動(dòng)詞divide是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以divided的前面加being，表示被動(dòng)．
8．hole 改為holes；考查名詞；結(jié)合上下文分析，有的同學(xué)把切開的土豆放進(jìn)挖的坑里面，前面的hole用了復(fù)數(shù)形式，這里也應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．them改為it；考查代詞，這里需要指代的是 the earth，為不可數(shù)名詞，故用it．
10．去掉but；考查連詞，although不能與but連用，故去掉but．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)當(dāng)中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結(jié)合上下文語(yǔ)境并充分運(yùn)用平時(shí)掌握的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，習(xí)慣用法，短語(yǔ)搭配等對(duì)短文進(jìn)行分析，以便找出文中的錯(cuò)誤所在，并加以修正．