【題目】假如你是李華,假設(shè)你暑期計劃兼職,想應(yīng)聘汕頭市某旅游公司“一日游”導(dǎo)游,帶外國人游 玩汕頭市,請根據(jù)自己的情況寫一封申請信。要點如下:
1、說明兼職原因; 2、闡述自身優(yōu)勢; 3、渴望得到兼職。
注意:字?jǐn)?shù)要求 100 字左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不算進(jìn)總字?jǐn)?shù);可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear Sir,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student in Shantou. I’m writing to apply for the position of the tour guide for Shantou One-day Trip.
I long to be a guide for the reason that it helps a lot to enrich my life experience. What’s more, it does good to my oral English since with the rapid development of tourism, more and more foreigners visit Shantou. And I am fully convinced that I’m qualified for the post. First of all , I have no difficulty communicating with English-speaking people fluently and effectively. Additionally, it is for16 years that I have been living here so that I am familiar with many places of interest in Shantou, which is my super advantage to introduce more than books to foreigners. Last but not least, I am a person of responsibility and enthusiasm.
I am sure I can perform my job excellently. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity to serve your company as a part-time worker.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
這篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求寫一封申請信。
第一步:審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一1、說明兼職原因; 2、得闡述自身優(yōu)勢; 3、渴望到兼職。第二,寫作人稱為第一人稱。第三,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。
第二步:布局段落,確定主要段落,次要段落,段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一段申請崗位 。第二段,1、說明兼職原因; 2、闡述自身優(yōu)勢;第三段,渴望得到兼職。第四段,期待回復(fù)。其中第二段為重點段落。
第三步:確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語:enrich my life experience,oral English,be qualified for, communicate with ,fluently ,effectively, be familiar with, places of interest , responsibility, enthusiasm, excellently, serve .
第四步:確定較為高級的句子:I long to be a guide for the reason that it helps a lot to enrich my life experience. I am fully convinced that I’m qualified for the post. I have no difficulty communicating with English-speaking people fluently and effectively. it is for16 years that I have been living here so that I am familiar with many places of interest in Shantou, which is my super advantage to introduce more than books to foreigners.
第五步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接:What’s more, And ,First of all, Additionally .
第六步:注意書寫,保持卷面整潔,避免劃線,亂擦。
【亮點說明】
文章思路清晰,語言規(guī)范,段落整齊,語篇連貫,層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式如:I long to be a guide for the reason that it helps a lot to enrich my life experience. I am fully convinced that I’m qualified for the post. I have no difficulty communicating with English-speaking people fluently and effectively. it is for16 years that I have been living here so that I am familiar with many places of interest in Shantou, which is my super advantage to introduce more than books to foreigners.
高級句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次。整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力。
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