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17．手機(jī)給現(xiàn)代人生活帶來(lái)許多便利，人們?cè)絹?lái)越離不開(kāi)手機(jī)．你在暑期社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)中，對(duì)手機(jī)的使用時(shí)宜行了調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)很多人在開(kāi)車、過(guò)馬路時(shí)．…都在使用手機(jī)，針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)你按下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文，呼吁人們文明使用手機(jī)．
1．描述這一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象；
2．談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)．
注意：開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)），短文內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文貫通．
As is shown in a survey of social practice in summer vacation，mobile phone bring us much convenience in our daily life．However，an increasing number of people use mobile phones in improper situations，such as driving cars，crossing the roads or attending conferences．Such inappropriate behavior is likely to bring bad consequences．On one hand，using mobile phones this way may cause terrible accidents，which is really dangerous．On the other hand，talking loudly on the phone in public places is far from being polite．
Personally，I think we shouldn't use mobile phones where attention or silence is needed，for instance，in libraries，hospitals，or in a plane．Besides，relevant laws are supposed to be passed in order to guide people's use of cellphones so that they will acquire good habits in public．Only when everybody has the awareness of the negative impacts of improper use of phones can we create a more civilized society．．

Answer 1

分析 經(jīng)典句型一：using mobile phones this way may cause terrible accidents，which is really dangerous．用這種方式使用手機(jī)可能會(huì)引起可怕的事故，這一點(diǎn)真的很危險(xiǎn)．這是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which為關(guān)系代詞指代整個(gè)主句的意思．
經(jīng)典句型二：Only when everybody has the awareness of the negative impacts of improper use of phones can we create a more civilized society．只有人人都意識(shí)到不合適的場(chǎng)合用手機(jī)的消極面，我們才能創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更加文明的社會(huì)．這是一個(gè)倒裝句，only引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)置于句首句子要做部分倒裝 can we create a more civilized society．

解答 As is shown in a survey of social practice in summer vacation，mobile phone bring us much convenience in our daily life．However，an increasing number of people use mobile phones in improper situations，such as driving cars，crossing the roads or attending conferences．（經(jīng)典句型一）Such inappropriate behavior is likely to bring bad consequences．On one hand，using mobile phones this way may cause terrible accidents，which is really dangerous．On the other hand，talking loudly on the phone in public places is far from being polite．【第一段描述現(xiàn)象】
Personally，I think we shouldn't use mobile phones where attention or silence is needed，for instance，in libraries，hospitals，or in a plane．Besides，relevant laws are supposed to be passed in order to guide people's use of cellphones so that they will acquire good habits in public．Only when everybody has the awareness of the negative impacts of improper use of phones can we create a more civilized society（經(jīng)典句型二）．【第二段闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．