Question

【題目】書面表達

假設(shè)你是John，你的筆友李剛英語口語不好，他來心情你談談你的意見，你給他寫一封回信。提出以下看法和建議。

1. 熟能生巧。

課上，爭取機會積極發(fā)言，老師會幫助你糾正錯誤。課下多練習，與喜歡講英語的同學共同實踐，互幫互助。

2. 不要失去信心，不要怕講錯，不要怕別人譏笑

3. 只要堅持，一定能提高英語口語水平

字數(shù)：100左右

Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English.

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Yours sincerely,

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English. Here is some of my advice on improving spoken English:

First of all, in class you must be active. Get every chance to speak. If you make any mistake, your teacher and your classmates will help you. Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. Practice makes perfect.

Why not look for one with whom you can practise speaking English? Thus you can help each other. Don't lose heart in your spoken English, and don't be afraid of making any mistakes or being laughed at. As long as you keep on speaking English, you are sure to improve your spoken English.

Yours sincerely,

John

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】

本次書面表達三段式，簡介層次分明，并合理地運用了一些高級句子。Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. Practice makes perfect.句中運用了祈使句，增強了語氣；Why not look for one with whom you can practise speaking English?句中運用了定語從句，以及采用問句的形式更能引起讀者繼續(xù)往下讀的興趣。