Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last Friday evening, I had a talk about my grandma. She told me that she wanted--visiting Shanghai. She would like to see the greatly changes in her hometown. Heard this, I began to book the air ticket for her on the Internet and I checked weather in Shanghai as well. After that, I helped my grandma prepare all the thing she might need during her trip such as a camera or a smart phone. The next day, I head for the airport to see my grandma off. Although it was a busy weekend, but I felt proud because I could do everything for my grandma. .

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】about---with

【2】that—what

【3】greatly—great

【4】Heard--Hearing

【5】Weather前加the

【6】thing—things

【7】or—and

【8】head—headed

【9】but—yet或者but去掉

【10】everything—something

【解析】

試題分析：奶奶想回上海看看這些年的變化，我積極為奶奶做準備并送去機場。能為奶奶做點事我很自豪。

【1】about---with.考查介詞。“和……交談”用talk with，talk about表示“談?wù)?/span>……內(nèi)容”，此處表示我和奶奶談了一次。故about---with.

【2】that—what.考查代詞。句意：她告訴我她想要做的事——去上海參觀。賓語從句she wanted中缺少賓語，指想要的內(nèi)容用what引導(dǎo)，故that—what.

【3】greatly—great.考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞changes不用副詞要用形容詞great，指“巨大的變化”，故greatly—great.

【4】Heard—Hearing.考查非謂語動詞。Heard是過去分詞與主語是被動關(guān)系，Hearing是現(xiàn)在分詞與主語是主動關(guān)系，此處主語I和動詞hear是主動關(guān)系,故Heard—Hearing.

【5】Weather前加the.考查冠詞。此處特指上海的天氣用定冠詞the，故Weather前加the.

【6】thing—things.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。此處名詞thing被all修飾，指所有的東西，要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，故thing—things.

【7】or—and.考查連詞。句中相機和手機是并列關(guān)系不是選擇關(guān)系，都是必須帶的東西，要用and，故or—and.

【8】head—headed.考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)文章所給時間Last Friday evening和動詞形式可知全文是過去時態(tài)，此處用過去式，故head—headed.

【9】but—yet或者but去掉。考查連詞。英語中不是“雖然……但是……”Although與but不能同時出現(xiàn)，故but—yet或者but去掉。

【10】everything—something.考查不定代詞。句意：能為奶奶做點事我很自豪。everything指“一切事物”不符句意，故everything—something.