Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，寧德市青年志愿者協(xié)會(Ningde Youth Volunteer Association)計劃從寧德市各 中學(xué)招募 500 名志愿者，進行急救知識普及活動，你想申請成為其中一員。請根據(jù)以下要點用 英語寫一封自我推薦信：

1．個人情況：17 歲，男，出身醫(yī)學(xué)世家。

2．個人優(yōu)勢：掌握基本急救知識，有救援經(jīng)驗，身體素質(zhì)好。.

3．……

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右，格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯: 普及 promote

Dear Sir/Madam,

Knowing that Ningde Youth volunteer Association plans to recruit 500 volunteers from every school,

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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

Knowing that Ningde Youth Volunteer Association plans to recruit 500 volunteers from every school, I’m writing to express my sincere wish to become one of you to promote the knowledge of first

aid.

My name is Li Hua, a boy of 17. Born in a doctor family, I have a good knowledge of first aid, which I’m convinced will make a big difference. When emergencies happen, my abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the injured will guarantee I am of great help. In addition, I am in good physical condition thanks to the constant exercises and bodybuilding.

On the whole, I believe I am qualified to be a volunteer. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。寧德市青年志愿者協(xié)會(Ningde Youth Volunteer Association)計劃從寧德市各 中學(xué)招募 500 名志愿者，進行急救知識普及活動，你想申請成為其中一員。請根據(jù)以下要點用 英語寫一封自我推薦信：個人情況：17 歲，男，出身醫(yī)學(xué)世家；個人優(yōu)勢：掌握基本急救知識，有救援經(jīng)驗，身體素質(zhì)好；3．……。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點寫的是個人優(yōu)勢。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，重點突出，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。My name is Li Hua, a boy of 17.句中使用同位語；I have a good knowledge of first aid, which I’m convinced will make a big difference.句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；When emergencies happen, my abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the injured will guarantee I am of great help.時間狀語從句和賓語從句完美結(jié)合；I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.固定句式使用巧妙；另外，Born in a doctor family, In addition, On the whole,等的使用為文章增色添彩。