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8．假如你是一名大學生，名叫李華，你所在的班級最近就"大學生是否應經(jīng)濟獨立"的話題展開討論，同學們發(fā)表了不同的看法．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫一封信給某英語報社，反映討論情況．

70%的同學的看法	靠自己打工來支付學費會影響學業(yè)； 現(xiàn)在把精力都用在學習上，將來報答父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；
30%的同學的看法	通過打工可以獲得工作經(jīng)驗，了解社會； 體會父母掙錢不易，從而戒掉亂花錢的壞習慣；
你的看法	…

注意：1．文章的起始句已給出；2．詞數(shù)150左右（不包括起始句）．
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent．
                                                                       
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一個表格式的作文，根據(jù)表格提供的內(nèi)容文章可寫成三段或者四段式．第一段描述70%學生的看法，第二段30%學生的看法，第三段針對這種現(xiàn)狀表達自己的觀點和看法．要把表格中的要點信心擴展成一個個完整的句子，然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求，把這些要點連句成文．這是一個書信，用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時表達文章的內(nèi)容．
亮點句型一：I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent．我寫信是想告訴你，關(guān)于大學生是否應該經(jīng)濟獨立的問題進行了熱烈的討論．本句是一個復雜句，其中there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent是一個賓語從句，做tell的賓語；在這個賓語從句中whether or not university students should be financially independent是介詞over的賓語從句．
亮點句型二：It is well known that opinions are divided on the question．眾所周知，在這個問題上意見有分歧．這是一個主語從句，其中it是形式主語，that opinions are divided on the question 是真正的主語．
亮點句型三：They hold the idea that university students should be financially independent．他們認為大學生應該財政獨立．這是一個同位語從句的句子，被解釋的名詞是idea，that university students should be financially independent是同位語從句．

解答 Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent．（亮點句型一）
It is well known that opinions are divided on the question.70% of the students think that university students don't have to be financially independent．（亮點句型二）In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows：in the first place，trying to make money will affect their studies．Furthermore，in the second place，they think that they can repay their parents in the future by working hard now，so there is no need for students to take part-time jobs to earn money．【70%學生的看法】
30% of the students，however，differ in their opinion on this matter．They hold the idea that university students should be financially independent．（亮點句型三）From their point of view，on one hand，doing part-time jobs will help one gain working experience and learn more of society．On the other hand，when students find it hard to make money，they won't waste their money any longer．【30%學生看法】
As far as I am concerned，I partly agree with the opinions above．I think that as grownups，we should not depend on our parents any more．However，if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us，we should put our studies in the first place．Thank you for reading my letter．【個人觀點】

點評 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．