Question

基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作(共1題，滿分15分)
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，介紹一下吳斌。

姓   名：吳斌 出生日期：1965年3月8日 出 生 地：浙江杭州 事跡介紹： 1. 2012年5月29日中午，吳斌駕駛長(zhǎng)途車行駛在無(wú)錫至杭州路段。突然一塊金屬板穿透擋風(fēng)玻璃砸向吳斌； 2. 吳斌雖然嚴(yán)重受傷，但在倒下前，他剎車（brake）、換擋，緩行路邊停車，還對(duì)車上的24名乘客說(shuō)不要在高速路上亂走； 3. 吳斌的肝臟幾乎被擊碎，最終于6月1日不幸去世。 相關(guān)報(bào)道： 1.吳斌的英雄事跡深深感動(dòng)了社會(huì)各界； 2.他被稱之為“最美司機(jī)”。

 參考詞匯：擋風(fēng)玻璃windscreen   換擋shift gears   肝臟 liver
【寫(xiě)作要求】
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Wu Bin, a bus driver, was born in the city of Hangzhou in Zhejiang Province on March 8, 1965. Wu was driving his bus from Wuxi to Hangzhou around noon on May 29, 2012, when he was suddenly struck by a large piece of iron that came flying through the windscreen. Despite his obvious injuries, Wu Bin hit the brakes, shifted gears, pulled over the car gently and told his passengers not to wander onto the highway before collapsing from his injuries. His liver was damaged to pieces so severely that he ultimately died from his injuries. Wu's heroic actions have deeply moved the public and he is honored as the most beautiful driver.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生談?wù)剬?duì)的理解。。注意增加細(xì)節(jié)，使銜接合理，還要盡量用高中階段學(xué)習(xí)詞匯和句型。注意長(zhǎng)短搭配。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文信息內(nèi)容完整。在五句話中，敘述了吳斌的職業(yè)和出生時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，他出事的前因后果，以及他在生命危急時(shí)刻不忘自己的職責(zé)的感人行為，最后是對(duì)這件事的評(píng)價(jià)。同時(shí)準(zhǔn)確應(yīng)用了be doing when 和so…that句式，生動(dòng)形象的came flying through和and、 despite等連接詞使篇章內(nèi)容連貫 。