Question

13．中秋節(jié)（農(nóng)歷八月十五）是中國的一個很重要的節(jié)日，是僅次于春節(jié)的第二大傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．在這一天家人團聚，共賞圓月．假設(shè)你是李華，請你給外籍筆友John寫一封信，給他介紹這一節(jié)日以及節(jié)日慶�；顒樱畠�(nèi)容要點如下：
1．中秋節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一，一般在九月或十月過中秋節(jié)．
2．中秋節(jié)這天家人團聚，吃月餅．月餅種類繁多，美味可口，形狀是圓的，像月亮．
3．中秋之夜，人們常常在室外邊吃月餅邊賞月．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：the MidAutumn Day 中秋節(jié)；traditional Chinese festival 中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；shape 形狀；mooncake 月餅；round 圓的；appreciate 欣賞
Dear John，
The MidAutumn Day is                ．
I'm looking forward to your letter．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹中秋節(jié)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明主題；二介紹節(jié)日慶�；顒�；三總結(jié)上文提出盼望．
高分句型：
1．The MidAutumn Day is one of the important traditional Chinese festivals that falls on a certain day in September or October句子里that引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞one of the important traditional Chinese festivals．
中秋節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一，一般在九月或十月過中秋節(jié)．
2．Moreover，on the evening of the MidAutumn Day，people get together outdoors，eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the sky．句子里on the evening of the MidAutumn Day是時間狀語；eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the sky．做伴隨狀語．
此外，中秋之夜，人們常常聚集在室外邊吃月餅邊賞月．

解答 Dear John，
The MidAutumn Day is one of the important traditional Chinese festivals that falls on a certain day in September or October．【高分句型一】（點明主題）During the day，family members get together and have mooncakes together．There are many kinds of mooncakes．The shape of a mooncake is round as it symbolizes a big moon．Moreover，on the evening of the MidAutumn Day，people get together outdoors，eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the sky．【高分句型二】On that evening，the moon looks brighter and rounder．We call this moon the full moon．（介紹節(jié)日慶�；顒樱�
In a word，the MidAutumn Day is a very important festival for Chinese people and I love it very much．
I'm looking forward to your letter．（總結(jié)上文提出盼望）
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                            Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
V-ing可以做時間狀語，條件狀語，讓步狀語，原因狀語，結(jié)果狀語，方式狀語，伴隨狀語．
時間狀語 Walking on the street，I saw an old friend．---When I walked on the street
條件狀語 Breaking the law，you will be punished．---If you break the law
讓步狀語 Having been refused for many times，he didn't give up．---Although he had been refused for many times
原因狀語 Being ill，he did not go to school．---Because he was ill
結(jié)果狀語 He was seriously ill，not being able to go to school．---so he was not able to go to school
方式狀語 He passed the exam finally using a cheating tool．---起到by作用
伴隨狀語 He is on his way home listening to music．-----起到with作用