Question

最近，你校許多學(xué)生早晨因時(shí)間緊張，往往不吃早飯就去上學(xué)，有的學(xué)生在學(xué)校以垃圾食品充饑。請(qǐng)你就這一現(xiàn)象用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1．不吃早飯的原因和后果；
2．吃垃圾食品的害處；
3．你的觀點(diǎn)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3．參考詞匯：垃圾食品junk food；卡路里calorie; 營養(yǎng)物質(zhì)nutrient

Answer 1

不唯一
One possible version:
Recently，many students in our school often miss breakfast，because they feel hurried in the morning. As a result，they find themselves tired during class and can hardly pay attention to their study. As time goes on，both their health and study will become worse.
Some students buy a lot of junk food to get rid of hunger at school. High in calories but low in nutrients，junk food makes people fatter and causes weakness in the body and many diseases if eaten often.
So I think it is necessary for us to have breakfast every day. We can sleep early and get up early. Then we will have enough time for our breakfast.

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫一篇英文短文。由于題干給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)潔，所以需要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。題目中的要點(diǎn)都要提到，缺一不可。另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意詞數(shù)100左右，不要寫得太多，更不能太少。盡量避免使用生僻詞匯，在正確使用簡(jiǎn)單句的同時(shí)，要努力使用復(fù)合句，提升作文檔次。
考點(diǎn)：話題類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。