Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，并結(jié)合你校園生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

The power of praise is great. Praise can help people build their confidence and go through ups and downs.

注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；

②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

④詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

From my point of view, with praise from others, we will overcome any obstacles on the way to success.

Few months ago, I was depressed because of my failure in a series of tests. Therefore, absorbed in my negative mood, I didn’t pay much attention to study. My teacher found my abnormal behavior and had a talk with me. I had thought he would criticize me, but he didn’t. He just said, “You are such a clever and hardworking boy. I believe you won’t let people around you down.” It was his praise that inspired me with confidence and made me realized that I shouldn’t give up. From then on, I studied harder than before and got good marks at length.

Praise is the best virtue. Only with praise can we have the confidence to defeat problems and move forward.

【解析】

試題分析：本文寫(xiě)作的話(huà)題是表?yè)P(yáng)的力量。接受了別人的表?yè)P(yáng)，可以讓我們有信心來(lái)克服生活指的困難，走向成功�？忌�可以用自己生活中的具體的事例來(lái)證明這個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)的正確性，既可以是自己的例子也可以是身邊人的例子。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀(guān)點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：考察開(kāi)放性短文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。