Question

5．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示要點(diǎn)，以"The Ways to Keep Healthy"為題，寫一篇短文．
1．健康很重要，人人都想保持健康．
2．飲食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因?yàn)樗鼈兏缓�纖維素（fibre）和維生素（vitamin）；少吃黃油（butter）、奶酪（cheese）、咖啡和巧克力（chocolate），因?yàn)樗鼈兒�糖（sugar）和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速變胖．
3．有良好的生活習(xí)慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過度勞累，不抽煙等等．
要求：
1．短文須包括上述所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使短文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)約80-100．
The Ways to Keep Healthy．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇議論文．就題目要求可知用第二人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來敘述．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點(diǎn)題；二飲食要健康；三有良好的生活習(xí)慣；四總結(jié)．
高分句型：
1．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fiber and vitamins．句子里
It做形式主語，代指to eat fresh fruit and vegetables；because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句．
吃新鮮的水果和蔬菜更好，因?yàn)樗鼈兒�有很多纖維和維生素．
2．Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．
句子里which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞 the food．
不要吃含有糖分和脂肪太多的食物，例如黃油，奶酪，咖啡和巧克力．

解答 Health is very is important to us．Everyone hopes to be in good health．But how？Here are some ways to keep healthy．（點(diǎn)題）
      First，you need a healthy diet．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fiber and vitamins．【高分句型一】Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．【高分句型二】Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily．（飲食要健康）Second，good living habits are very important．You should do regular exercise to build up your body．Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．You need 8 hours'sleep a night and don't work too hard．Smoking is a bad habit，so never smoke．（有良好的生活習(xí)慣）
     In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全．通過對(duì)眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱．