【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.

【答案】

【1】experience→experiences

【2】holding→held

【3】chosen前面加上been

【4】me→myself

【5】such→so

【6】去掉a

【7】do→did

【8】in→with

【9】confident→confidence

【10】successfully→successful/succeed

【解析】

試題分析：考查后置定語(yǔ)，固定短語(yǔ)，時(shí)態(tài)等。

【1】experience→experiences；lots of修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把experience改為其復(fù)數(shù)形式experiences。

【2】holding→held；要作competition的后置定語(yǔ)，應(yīng)是被舉行，故用過(guò)去分詞表被動(dòng)，故把holding改為held。

【3】chosen前面加上been；我應(yīng)是被選擇參加演講比賽，故在chosen前面加上been。

【4】me→myself；devote oneself to...致力于……，故把me改為myself。

【5】such改為so；so…that…固定句型，表示“如此…以致…”，我如此緊張以致于站在臺(tái)上時(shí)忘了一切，故把such改為so。

【6】去掉a；第七句N(xiāo)ot until I caught a sight of my teacher，catch sight of…固定短語(yǔ)，看見(jiàn)….故去掉a

【7】do→did；本文是講述過(guò)去的事，應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)，故把do改為did。

【8】in→with；be filled with是固定短語(yǔ)，表示“充滿了…”，故把in改為with。

【9】confident→confidence；it is ..that是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，本句是表達(dá)自信使人成功，應(yīng)用“自信”的名詞形式，故confident改為confidence。

【10】successfully→successful/succeed；make為使役動(dòng)詞，后接動(dòng)詞原形或形容詞表示“使人…”，故把successfully改為successful/succeed。

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