Question

你所在的班級(jí)將要興行一次英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)主題交流會(huì)。你將是主要發(fā)言人之一。你因此精心準(zhǔn)備了一份發(fā)言稿，從課前，課上，課后三個(gè)方面談了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法。字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。
溫馨提示：請(qǐng)考慮如何順著開(kāi)頭繼續(xù)往下寫(xiě)。
Good afternoon, everyone, I am very honored to have the chance to share with you my                                                                  
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                      
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
That’s all. Thank you for your listening and I hope the above can help you.

Answer 1

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Possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone, I am very honored to have the chance to share with you my ideas about how to learn English well.
Before class, we should try our best to get ready. We can learn some keys words before class. We can also find out the difficult parts.
When we are having English classes, it is very important for us students to listen to the teacher carefully. Meanwhile, we should write down the important points in our notebooks. And do remember we must be active in class.
After class, there is a lot of work to do. First, we must finish all the homework that the teacher has given us. Besides, it will helps us a lot s to do more practice, such as reading practice, listening practice, writing practice and so on. It is also a good idea to watch TV programmes in English or listen to some English songs, which will surely do good to our English.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening and I hope the above can help you.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，且是一篇發(fā)言稿，所以要用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要些的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的發(fā)言稿。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于發(fā)言稿，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。