Question

【題目】假如你是李華，從報紙上看到中老年英語培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中畢業(yè)生招聘暑期兼職輔導(dǎo)員，負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)員課間服務(wù)事項(xiàng)。請根據(jù)下面的廣告內(nèi)容用英語寫一份求職信。

ASSISI ANTS WANTED

Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：

1．Good at English．

2．Experienced priority．

Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163．com．

注意：

1．短文詞數(shù)100字左右；

2．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

Dear Sir／Madam，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.

I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.

In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.

【解析】

【試題分析】這是一篇敘述性的求職信寫作。依據(jù)題目及招聘廣告所提供的信息，抓住廣告上要求的兩點(diǎn)來寫求職信，清晰表達(dá)，并且要不失亮點(diǎn)，準(zhǔn)確把握英文句子的書寫，避免出現(xiàn)漢語式英語的現(xiàn)象。要求：1．短文詞數(shù)100字左右；2．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文三部分，首先點(diǎn)明自己來應(yīng)聘這一職位，其次介紹自己的情況，最后對以上內(nèi)容簡短總結(jié)并再次表明自己希望被聘用。雖結(jié)構(gòu)簡單，但是層次清晰，其中也用了一些高級的句型，使得文章水平在一個高的層面，如: I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.賓語從句；I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.等定語從句；It would be appreciated if句型。還采用了一些比較好的短語，In addition，另外；In short簡而言之；有條有理，避免文章比較單一，簡單無味；同樣有一些好的動詞的固定搭配：am good at，looked after，’m available for如這些都給文章帶來了亮點(diǎn)。