Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)筆友 Peter 對(duì)科學(xué)研究感興趣，他來信請(qǐng)你介紹一位中國(guó)的科學(xué)家及其研究成果。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 科學(xué)家的姓名;

2. 科學(xué)家的研究成果；

3. 該研究成果的意義。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于 50；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I know from your letter that you are interested in scientific research. Do you know Tu Youyou?

Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance qinghaosu, one of the world’s most-effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood. And she volunteered to be the first human subject. It was safe, so she did successful experiments with human patients. She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine that has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.

If you want to know more scientists and their research, do let me know.

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇一封信，給英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Peter介紹一位中國(guó)的科學(xué)家及其研究成果.

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 科學(xué)家的姓名;

2. 科學(xué)家的研究成果；

3. 該研究成果的意義。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Be interested in; scientific research; Tu Youyou; antimalarial substance ; malaria-fighting; sweet wormwood; volunteer to do; human subject; successful; Nobel Prize; significantly; death rate.

第三步：連詞成句

1.I know from your letter that you are interested in scientific research.

2. Do you know Tu Youyou?

3. Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance qinghaosu, one of the world’s most-effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood.

4. She volunteered to be the first human subject.

5. It was safe, so she did successful experiments with human patients.

6. She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine that has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.

7. If you want to know more scientists and their research, do let me know.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改