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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

At the age of ten, I had a experience visiting a local American family with my parents. The family, the Smiths, which lived in a small village, led quite a simple and comfortable life. They were busy working in their fields during the day, and went to bed early at night, tiring after a long day's hard work. On weekends, they usually held small family get－togethers, dancing and drinking to celebrate the happy days they ever had. Beside, people in the family were all very warm and enthusiastic. They did his best to treat us，making us feel at home. We really had funs together talking and laughing. As a matter of fact, they were eager to learn about Chinese culture and custom, especial Chinese food. They said Chinese food was a more balanced diet, containing much fiber, and less fat. Much to our delight, they promised to visit China in next year.

Answer 1

【答案】At the age of ten, I had experience visiting a local American family with my parents. The family, the Smiths, lived in a small village, led quite a simple and comfortable life. They were busy working in their fields during the day, and went to bed early at night, after a long day's hard work. On weekends, they usually held small family get－togethers, dancing and drinking to celebrate the happy days they ever had.， people in the family were all very warm and enthusiastic. They did best to treat us，making us feel at home. We really had together talking and laughing. As a matter of fact, they were eager to learn about Chinese culture and custom, Chinese food. They said Chinese food was a more balanced diet, containing fiber, and less fat. Much to our delight, they promised to visit China next year.

【解析】這篇文章介紹了作者在十歲時(shí)，和父母去美國拜訪當(dāng)?shù)匾患胰说慕?jīng)歷。

考查冠詞。experience首字母發(fā)音是元音，所以a改成an。

考查定語從句。who lived in a small village是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指人，所以which改成who。

考查v+ed形式。V+ed修飾人，而v+ing修飾物，這里修飾人，所以tired改成tiring。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。表示過去的過去，用過去完成時(shí)，所以ever之前加had。

考查語義理解。此外這個(gè)家里的人們都非常溫暖和熱情。所以beside改成besides。

考查代詞。他們盡他們最大的努力，讓我們感覺像在家里一樣。所以his改成their。

考查固定短語。have fun玩兒的開心，是固定短語，所以funs改成fun。

考查副詞。特別是中國食物，這里應(yīng)該使用副詞，所以especial改成especially。

考查比較級(jí)。包含更多的纖維，更少的脂肪。由less fat可知，這里應(yīng)該使用比較級(jí)，所以much改成more。