Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Tristan對你校正在舉行的“中華好書分享”活動很感興趣，希望你介紹此活動，并推薦好書。請你寫封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 該活動的意義；

2. 同學(xué)們參與的情況；

3. 你推薦的書籍及理由。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tristan,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tristan,

I’d be glad to introduce this wonderful activity. The aim is to enlarge our reading horizon by sharing good books and helps to appriciate our own culture as well. Many of my classmates have taken an active part and recommended for me many fantastic classical Chinese books.

I share with a book named The Journey to the West (Chinese pinyin as Xiyouji), which is listed in the Four Great Chinese Classical Novels. The adventures in the book are described in a fascinating style, so it has been translated in many languages, English of course included.

Could you recommend some good books to me as well? Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求給美國朋友Tristan寫一封回信，介紹介紹此活動的內(nèi)容，并給他推薦好書。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文。

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1.該活動的意義；

2.同學(xué)們參與的情況；

3.你推薦的書籍及理由。

第二步：列提綱（重點短語）

The aim is to；have taken an active part；share with；it has been translated

第三步：連詞成句

1.The aim is to enlarge our reading horizon by sharing good books and helps to appriciate our own culture as well.

2.Many of my classmates have taken an active part and recommended for me many fantastic classical Chinese books.

3.I share with a book named The Journey to the West (Chinese pinyin as Xiyouji)

4.it has been translated in many languages, English of course included.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：簡述活動情況；推薦一本好書和理由；期盼回復(fù)。

2.表示并列補充關(guān)系：as well；so；of course；and.

第五步：潤色修改