Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的筆友Mike從電視上得知前段時間北京多個地方出現(xiàn)霧霾(haze),非常擔心，寫E-mail詢問有關情況，請回復。 1.實況描述; 2.對生活造成的影響 3.成因簡析與教訓; 4.你個人的情況。

要求：1.詞數(shù)100-120;

2.email的開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern.

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Yours,Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern. Last months several places in Beijing were blanketed with thick yellow fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets.

Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors. But to make a significant change, we really have to do more to protect our environment.

To live a better life we have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.

Yours， Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達這些要點以外，還要給出自己的建議，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。

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