Question

18．李華是一個生活在某個社區(qū)的孩子，她感到孩子們的社區(qū)生活單調(diào)，幾乎沒有朋友，于是打算向社區(qū)負責人黃叔叔提出解決該問題的建議．請你就此事以李華的名義寫一篇100詞左右的郵件．內(nèi)容包括：
1．組織社區(qū)里孩子們參加清潔本小區(qū)的勞動．
2．提供一個固定場所供孩子們課后學(xué)習(xí)和交流．
3．鼓勵孩子們加入社區(qū)足球俱樂部并安排比賽．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Mr．Huang，
I am Li Hua，a child living in community．
                                                                 
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Second，I wonder if you could find us a room to do our homework so that we can help and learn from each other．其次，我想知道是否你能幫我們找到一個可以供學(xué)習(xí)和交流的地方．
高分句型二：
Third，I think it's a good idea to encourage children to join the community's football club and arrange some mathes．第三，我認為鼓勵孩子們加入社區(qū)足球俱樂部并安排比賽是很好的主意．
句型一 ①if you could find us a room to do our homework 該句是一個位于wonder后面的賓語從句
             ②so that we can help and learn from each other 該句是一個由so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句
句型二 I think it's a good idea to encourage children  該句中有一個固定句型：it is+n+to do做．．是怎么樣的

解答 Dear Uncle Huang，
     I am Li Hua，a child living in this community．Most of the children in our community feel lonely and we have few friends here．To change this situation，I'd like to offer some suggestions．（提出觀點）
    First，would you please organize the children to clean up our neighborhood regularly？Through this activity，we can know each other and make new friends．Second，I wonder if you could find us a room to do our homework so that we can help and learn from each other．（高分句型一） Third，I think it's a good idea to encourage children to join the community's football club and arrange some mathes．（具體建議）（高分句型二）
     I hope we can get more involved in our community and our life will be colorful and full of fun．
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．