Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給材料、提綱以及要求寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件。
背景材料：
編者按：本期刊出Lora的來(lái)信，歡迎讀者就信中談到的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。
Dear editor.
I’m a senior high school student,and I want to work part-time this summer. I think it is good to do so, but my parents don’t agree with me. I just can’t understand them and I need your advice.
Lara
要求：1.短文須寫(xiě)在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2.短文詞數(shù)120左右。
3.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，可適當(dāng)增加使行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
4.書(shū)寫(xiě)須清晰、工整。
提綱：第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由(賺零花錢(qián)及學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立、如何處世等)
第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由(對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)及個(gè)人安全等方面的考慮)
第3段：你給Lora的具體建議
I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time.
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Answer 1

I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time . First, she can make some pocket money to meet her daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve social skills.
But her parents may regard learning as an increasingly important task for Lora. This holiday should be a catch-up time for independent study. Besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.
My advice for Lora is this: make a detailed plan for her study and work; ask her friends to work together with her, and tell her parents that she ean manage things properly. I wish Lora a pleasant summer.

考查提綱類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作。話題是就信中談到的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并提出建議，所以首先要審題，找出要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式表示的，第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由(賺零花錢(qián)及學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立、如何處世等)第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由(對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)及個(gè)人安全等方面的考慮)第3段：你給Lora的具體建議要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不能只是把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語(yǔ)、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。還要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。提綱類(lèi)作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因?yàn)楸疚牡囊�求是不能�?xiě)出提綱式，所以在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要變換句式，不能一個(gè)句式一成不變，要給閱卷老師新鮮的感覺(jué)。