【題目】我們?cè)谇髮W(xué)過(guò)程中,總是少不了參加集體活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華,將參加學(xué)校英文社舉辦的以"A Group Activity"為主題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文:

1.回憶你參加的一次集體活動(dòng);

2.談?wù)勀銓?duì)這次活動(dòng)的感想。

【答案】

Various group activities are never absent in my school life. Among these colorful activities, one is still fresh in my mind.

It was a climbing activity intended to relax ourselves, in which all of my classmates participated. A lot of guys even arrived ahead of time. A race between boys and girls attracted much attention as both felt confident. Once the race began, everyone ran, eager to be the first. However, since the weather became hotter, we girls faced our challenge. With face in boiling red, we seemed to be worn out. "Hold on ! Hold on!" Boys gave the encouragement and did some assistance. At last, we struggled to beat ourselves and reached the top. As for boys, they won the match without doubt.

Such group activities not only free us from heavy work for a moment, but also strengthen friendship between classmates. Besides, they build up our body, equipping us for more efficient study. As is expected by most students, such activities should be included much more in our school life.

【解析】

試題分析:本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作,根據(jù)提示信息和要求來(lái)寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1. 仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2. 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3. 注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。4. 本文是記敘文,敘述內(nèi)容應(yīng)該具體詳實(shí),有聲有色。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,文章嚴(yán)格按照題目中所給的要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě),開(kāi)篇之后具體介紹了參加第一次集體活動(dòng)的詳細(xì)過(guò)程,最后談了自己的感想和體會(huì)。還有一些短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用,比如Once,However,At last,Besides等插入語(yǔ),使得文章語(yǔ)言流暢。另外,句式多樣化,在It was a climbing activity intended to relax ourselves, in which all of my classmates participated. 中用了復(fù)雜的定語(yǔ)從句;Such group activities not only free us from heavy work for a moment, but also strengthen friendship between classmates.用了not only... , but also...連接的復(fù)雜句。此外,文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)intended to, attracted much attention, eager to, worn out, build up等,使得文章一氣呵成。

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