Question

很多學(xué)生在考試中失敗并不是因?yàn)樗麄兊哪芰Σ粔颍�而是因�(yàn)閴毫μ�大。�?qǐng)根據(jù)你的親身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)壓力的看法以及你應(yīng)對(duì)壓力的措施，詞數(shù)120左右。

 

Answer 1

Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the pressure from many aspects. In my opinion, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.

As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National College Examination is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go to university.

In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly, I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：In my opinion在我看來(lái), of great importance to 對(duì)…很重要，either …… or……要么…要么…， try every means to Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the pressure from many aspects. 這句話使用了not…but…結(jié)構(gòu)， It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger.這句話使用省略句和it做形式主語(yǔ)， What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.這句話使用了主語(yǔ)從句， However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National College Examination is approaching. 這句話使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， In order to reduce pressure, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; 這句話使用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music;這句話使用目的狀語(yǔ)從句 ，還有范文使用了first, secondly, also這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。總之，范文使用大量高中教材中出現(xiàn)的高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和句型，考生應(yīng)該能做到學(xué)以致用。

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