Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)漫畫(huà)，寫(xiě)一篇短文。

1. 這幅漫畫(huà)描述了什么？

2. 這幅漫畫(huà)想要告訴我們什么？

3. 發(fā)表你個(gè)人的看法。

注意：

1. 開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好。（不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）    2. 可作必要的發(fā)揮想象。      

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。  參考詞匯：溺愛(ài) spoil

 

Answer 1

【答案】

From the picture, we can see the boy has become the focus of the family. He’s riding a “horse”— his father with a proud look on his face, surrounded by the other devoted “slaves” including his mother and his grandparents who are doing almost everything for him.

Seeing the picture, I can’t help thinking how ridiculous such love and care is. However, what is reflected in the picture is not a rare phenomenon in modern society. Spoiled by their parents, children don’t need to do any housework  like cooking, washing clothes etc. As a consequence, quite a few children are turning into self-centered “l(fā)ittle princesses” or “l(fā)ittle princes” in today’s society, which is definitely not the outcome we would love to see.  There is no doubt that parents are to blame for that.

In my opinion, since children are the future of our society, it is important to train them to develop a sense of independence as well as responsibility rather than encourage their laziness. Therefore, parents should realize the seriousness of this problem and show their love and care in a reasonable way.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫(xiě)作：做題時(shí)：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，把握中心。2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤�！　�5. 宜詳則詳，該略則略。對(duì)于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。一般說(shuō)來(lái)，看圖寫(xiě)話中的漢語(yǔ)提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，有的還規(guī)定了文章所采用的體裁，如使用書(shū)信、留言、日記等。因此，在審題時(shí)我們一定要注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。

考點(diǎn)：看圖寫(xiě)作