Question

19．假設(shè)你是李華，你和好朋友Lily約好上周六一起去書店（bookstore）．但是，你因故沒能赴約，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給她發(fā)一封email．
內(nèi)容包括：1．真誠道歉；  2．說明原因； 3．彌補(bǔ)措施．
注意：
1．時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用    2．詞數(shù)100左右
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）   4．請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答．
Dear Lily，
I am very sorry that                                       
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 題目要求寫一封郵件，就不能如約一起去書向Bob道歉，使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作．寫作內(nèi)容包括：表示歉意；說明原因；彌補(bǔ)措施，另約時(shí)間．注意使用連接詞，使作文內(nèi)容連貫．
亮點(diǎn)說明：范文包括了所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，做到了語意連貫．范文使用了賓語從句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的狀語從句so that we'll have more time to read and select books；條件句If it's convenient for you；省略句If not等，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使內(nèi)容更加豐富．

解答 Dear Lily，
      I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon．I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon．（高分句型一）I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble．
     Shall we go on Saturday morning？We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books．If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate．（高分句型二）If not，let me know what time suits you best．I should be available any time after school next week．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．