Question

13．假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友彼得希望成為2022年北京-張家口冬奧會(huì)的志愿者．他向你寫(xiě)信詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)情況，并求助怎樣學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)．請(qǐng)給他回信，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．收到來(lái)信，獲悉求助；
2．冬奧盛會(huì)帶給舉辦地很多影響（具體說(shuō)明）；
3．學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
參考詞匯：志愿者volunteer  2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Olympic Winter Games
Dear Peter，
                                                                                  
                                                                                  

Answer 1

分析 這是一封信，根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點(diǎn)明主題；二冬奧盛會(huì)帶給舉辦地很多影響；三學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議．
高分句型：
1．Beijing has become the first city to host both Summer and Winter Olympic Games，and it together with Zhangjiakou is the host of the 2022 Olympic Winter Games．句子里to host both Summer and Winter Olympic Games，做 the first city 的定語(yǔ)；together with 連接主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用就遠(yuǎn)原則．
北京成為第一個(gè)即舉辦夏季奧運(yùn)會(huì)又舉辦冬季奧運(yùn)會(huì)的城市，它將和張家口一起承辦2022年冬季奧運(yùn)會(huì)．
2．If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to write to me．句子里further時(shí)far的比較級(jí)，表示"更進(jìn)一步"；hesitate to 表示"猶豫去做"．
如果你有更進(jìn)一步的問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)來(lái)問(wèn)我，不要猶豫．

解答 I'm glad to receive your letter，saying you are hoping to be a volunteer in 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics．（點(diǎn)明主題） Beijing has become the first city to host both Summer and Winter Olympic Games，and it together with Zhangjiakou is the host of the 2022 Olympic Winter Games．【高分句型一】Since people in China knew they got the chance to host the 2022 Olympic Winter Games，they have been more and more intrested in winter games，such as skating，skiing and so on．Many programmes about the  Olympic Winter Games are being on  at TV stations．（冬奧盛會(huì)帶給舉辦地很多影響）
I'd like to give you two suggestions on how to learn Chinese well．First，speak a little Chinese every day．The absolute best way to learn any new language is just to speak it．Second，attend a Chinese class or discussion group．After all，language learning settings are of great importance．（學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議．）
If you have any further questions，please don't hesitate to write to me．【高分句型二】
Yours
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．審查書(shū)面表達(dá)題干中隱含的讀者對(duì)象和撰寫(xiě)人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由誰(shuí)寫(xiě)給誰(shuí)"的．寫(xiě)稿人是誰(shuí)一般都已明確指出，給出形式假設(shè)環(huán)境中的"某人"，如"假設(shè)你是李華"，寫(xiě)作時(shí)即用第一人稱(chēng)"我"，即李華．而讀者對(duì)象有時(shí)沒(méi)有明示，要考生自己去進(jìn)行判斷．