Question

15．目前，教育部提出要把足球納入學(xué)校體育課程教學(xué)體系，作為體育課必修內(nèi)容．某英語報以Popularization of Campus Football為題，向中學(xué)生征文．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要求用英語寫一篇短文應(yīng)征．內(nèi)容包括：
1．足球進校園的意義；
2．學(xué)校存在的問題（如場地，設(shè)施，師資等）；
3．你的看法．
注意：
1．根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；
2．短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．詞數(shù)120左右．
4．文中不得使用真實姓名、校名．
5．參考詞匯：設(shè)施facility  校園campus  普及popularize
Popularization of Campus Football
China's Ministry of Education has promoted popularization of campus football in the country's schools．        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Secondly，it will enable teenagers to lay a solid foundation of football at an early age，which makes it possible for the national team to select excellent football players in the future．
高分句型二：
As far as I am concerned，in order to popularize campus football and realize China's football dream，I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to the youth football progress and that local governments at various levels should take effective measures to support the youth football development．
句型一 which makes it possible for the national team to select excellent football players in the future．該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的費限制性定語從句，which在從句中充當主語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的整個主句
句型二 I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to..該句中包含一個由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，that在從句中不作句子成分
此外，還有以下短語和高級詞匯：as far as sb be concerned  在某人看來  take measures to do sth 采取措施作某事

解答 Popularization of Campus Football
China's Ministry of Education has promoted popularization of campus football in the country's schools． It is of great significance to popularize campus football．Firstly，football training in schools will help teenagers to build up their bodies．Secondly，it will enable teenagers to lay a solid foundation of football at an early age，which makes it possible for the national team to select excellent football players in the future．（重要意義）（高分句型一）
However，ahead of us lie some difficulties．At present，the majority of the schools in our country have no football facilities，like standard football fields．Also，qualified coaches are in great need．
As far as I am concerned，in order to popularize campus football and realize China's football dream，I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to the youth football progress and that local governments at various levels should take effective measures to support the youth football development．（個人意見發(fā)表）（高分句型二）

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．