Question

假設你是中學生李華，聽說沈陽將在棋盤山風景區(qū)附近建一座發(fā)電站(power station)。請給某英語報社寫一封信，闡明自己的觀點。信的內(nèi)容須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.反對計劃

2.陳述理由1）修建發(fā)電站需砍伐樹木。2）風景區(qū)一旦被破壞，將無法恢復。

要求：1）100詞左右。2）可適當增加內(nèi)容，使行文連貫。3）信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

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Yours faithfully,

                                                               Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Editor,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I hear that our city government wants to build a power station near Mt. Qipan，an attraction of Shenyang City, aiming to provide more energy and promote our local economy. However, I’m against the plan, and my reasons are as follows:

First and foremost, to build the power station, many people will have to move from their homes and a great number of trees must be cut down, which will certainly disturb the peaceful life of the local residents and harm the environment as well. Worse still, once the scenery of Mt. Qipan is destroyed, it can never be restored.

In my humble view, this plan leaves much to be desired and can’t benefit people in the long run. Therefore, I strongly advocate that the government have a second thought about this plan.

Yours faithfully,

                                                               Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇議論文。議論文通常包括三個主要部分.文章的第一部分是論點,通常是第一自然段,簡明闡述作者的觀點,或贊成什么,或反對什么.該觀點統(tǒng)領全文。

文章的第二部分是主干，由一個自然段或多個自然段組成．作者在文章的主干部分，引用相關的論據(jù)來論證或證偽前面提出的某一觀點．每一自然段只能包括一個話題（argument）及若干相關的論據(jù)或事例（statistics, facts and examples）．所有的話題和事例，都必須支持自己前面提出的觀點，不相矛盾．

文章的第三部分是結(jié)論，通常是最后一個自然段．作者通過歸納上述論證，得出與自己觀點相符的結(jié)論．

常用結(jié)構(gòu)：

１）引出討論話題：our class have had a heated discussion about whether …or not /which/what…

２）贊同或反對及理由陳述：some are in favor of …,others are against…;some hold the view that…;60% of the students think it is…to do …;the advantages for that are as follows; firstly; secondly; thirdly; besides; in addition; what’s more; in a word; in short…

３）引出另一方的轉(zhuǎn)折詞語：however, on the other hand, while, on the contrary, whereas…

４）我的看法及理由：in my opinion, personally, I think…