假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線(___),并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university ?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion , a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.

1.student → students

2.去掉by

3.and →or

4.在interested 后加in

5.impossibly→ possible

6.believes→believe

7.graduate →graduating或graduate前加who

8.a→ the

9.can→ can't 或后加not

10.they →we

【解析】

1.student → students考查名詞!案呷膶W(xué)生”應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

2.去掉by考查固定短語。pass the examination意為:通過考試。

3.and →or考查連詞。句意:我應(yīng)該選擇一個好專業(yè)或是一個好大學(xué)呢?根據(jù)句意可知:是“或者;或是”。

4.在interested 后加in考查固定短語。Be interested in意為:對……感興趣。

5.impossibly→ possible考查形容詞。句意:這可以使他們將來做自己最喜歡的工作成為可能。

6.believes→believe考查主謂一致。those who think differently believes…believe的主語是those故不使用第三人稱單數(shù)。

7.graduate →graduating或graduate前加who考查動詞。這里可以使用v-ing作后置定語也可以使用定語從句。

8.a→ the考查冠詞。Best是形容詞最高級,前面使用定冠詞the。

9.can→ can't 或后加not考查代詞。句意:如果我們不盡全力就不能在某個領(lǐng)域得到成功。

10.they →we考查前后搭配。句意:……這位男士不應(yīng)該先伸出他的手。His指代前面的the man。

考點: 記敘文。

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