Question

【題目】假如你叫李平，你的美國網(wǎng)友Brian想了解你的家鄉(xiāng)成都的情況。請你根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信。

1. 所在位置：中國西南

2. 主要特點：歷史悠久；熊貓故鄉(xiāng)；美食之都。

3. 現(xiàn)代城市：高樓大廈，購物中心林立；各種交通方式都很方便，近年來共開通了4條地鐵線路。

4. 閑適的生活方式給所有來訪者留下深刻印象。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右，書信的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 不要逐字翻譯，表達清楚要點即可。

3. 需適當(dāng)增加連接詞使行文連貫。

Dear Brian,

I’m glad you’re interested to know something about my hometown Chengdu.

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I do hope that some day you’ll come to visit this city.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Brian,

I’m glad you’re interested to know something about my hometown Chengdu. And I’m now making a brief introduction about it.

Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is a city with a long history. It is the home to the pandas and also famous for its delicious food and snacks. Meanwhile, Chengdu is a modern city with a number of high-rise buildings and big shopping malls. As for traffic, there’re all means of transportation which are efficient and convenient. In recent years, 4 subway lines have been in use. The lifestyle here is relaxing and comfortable, which has left a deep impression on all the visitors.

I do hope that some day you’ll come to visit this city.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點已給出，寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；注意選擇正確的時態(tài)和人稱；適當(dāng)使用高級詞匯和高級句型提升文章檔次。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇英語書信，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹，語言精練，運用高級句子。I’m glad you’re interested to know something about my hometown Chengdu.使用賓語從句；Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is a city with a long history.過去分詞短語作狀語；there’re all means of transportation which are efficient and convenient.限制性定語從句用在句中；The lifestyle here is relaxing and comfortable, which has left a deep impression on all the visitors.非限制性定語從句運用巧妙；I do hope that some day you’ll come to visit this city.強調(diào)謂語堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，Meanwhile, As for traffic, In recent years,的運用為文章增色添彩。