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【題目】根據(jù)高二年級(jí)指定背誦的寫作篇目，默寫第六篇。以下是漢語提示。答在答題卡上！

假如你是李華。你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復(fù)友情，并特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議。請(qǐng)你給Tom回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)包括：

1．禮物選擇：

2．你的理由；

3．其它和解建議

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear_Tom，

I'm_glad_to_hear_that_you_are_considering_making_up_with_Peter.If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.

Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。根據(jù)題干可知：假如你是李華，你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復(fù)友情，并特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議。要求你給Tom回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)包括：1．禮物選擇：2．你的理由；3．其它和解建議。

同時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。

2. 要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

3.注意語氣。既然這是一封建議信，應(yīng)該委婉地提出自己的建議，并表示兩個(gè)朋友可以早日和好。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1. 文章層次分明，要點(diǎn)齊全，既論述選擇什么樣的禮物，同時(shí)又講述了理由，同時(shí)還提出了其他和解建議，語言生動(dòng)流暢。

2.此外，文章還運(yùn)用了＂If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.＂虛擬語氣以及“In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.”非限制性定語從句。