Question

1．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信談及他最近在學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)書(shū)法過(guò)程中困難重重．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示為其寫(xiě)封回信，告之怎樣克服困難，并祝他學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步．
1．請(qǐng)教老師；
2．反復(fù)練習(xí)；
3．永不言棄．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：書(shū)法-calligraphy．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy．In fact，you are not alone．Many people，including many of my classmates，feel it hard to write with a writing brush．（高分句型一）
However，it is very important to learn the artistic handwriting of Chinese characters．Learning Chinese calligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history．（高分句型二）Besides，written Chinese is well-known for its beauty．If you want to be a good user of the writing brush，first you have to be patient．And second，you have to keep practicing．Last but not least，you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models．Just be confident and practice hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封信．第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信件；你的美國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信談及他最近在學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)書(shū)法過(guò)程中困難重重．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示為其寫(xiě)封回信，告之怎樣克服困難，并祝他學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步，主要內(nèi)容包括：請(qǐng)教老師；反復(fù)練習(xí)；永不言棄．人稱(chēng)使用第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：including（包括），the artistic handwriting（藝術(shù)書(shū)寫(xiě)方式），helpful（有幫助的），Chinese culture and history（中國(guó)文化和歷史），be well-known for（因?yàn)椤�而著名），be patient（有耐心的），keep practicing（保持訓(xùn)練），confident（有信心的）等．
第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題．
第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如插入語(yǔ)Many people，including many of my classmates，feel it hard to write with a writing brush．；祈使句Just be confident and practice hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy．；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞Learning Chinese cal-ligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history．．全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力．另外，however，besides，first，second，last but not least等詞組的使用，使得文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy．In fact，you are not alone．Many people，including many of my classmates，feel it hard to write with a writing brush．（高分句型一）
       However，it is very important to learn the artistic handwriting of Chinese characters．Learning Chinese calligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history．（高分句型二）Besides，written Chinese is well-known for its beauty．If you want to be a good user of the writing brush，first you have to be patient．And second，you have to keep practicing．Last but not least，you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models．Just be confident and practice hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．