Question

在高三階段，學(xué)習(xí)比較緊張，正確的學(xué)習(xí)方法尤為重要。下表顯示了兩位同學(xué)不同的學(xué)習(xí)方法，請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)述并發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，字?jǐn)?shù)在120詞左右。文章開頭已給出。

學(xué)習(xí)方法	李華	王海	你的觀點(diǎn)
白天	上課專心聽講，盡可能經(jīng)常向老 師請(qǐng)教疑難問(wèn)題。	上課打瞌睡，漏掉了 許多要點(diǎn)。
晚上	花較少的時(shí)間完成作業(yè)，早點(diǎn)休息，上課經(jīng)常保持旺盛的精力。	花較多時(shí)間完成作業(yè)，熬夜學(xué)習(xí)，導(dǎo)致注意力無(wú)法集中。

參考詞匯：①attentively 專心                 ②energetic 精力旺盛

③concentrate on 集中注意力于      ④effectively有效地

Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both them work but they have different learning methods.                                                                

                                                                              

                                                                              

       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively, trying to catch everything that the teachers say in class. Besides, she often consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day. However, Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning. He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework, so he often feels sleepy in class. As a result, he misses lots of key points and it is usually takes him more time to finish his homework, which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing.

In my opinion, Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself. So I prefer her learning method.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的大部分內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，考生可以在個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)方面做進(jìn)一步第發(fā)揮。直接表示出對(duì)于前一種做法的支持。寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。