Question

17．高一學(xué)生李華學(xué)習(xí)英語遇上了困難，寫信向他的老師Mary尋求學(xué)好英語的學(xué)習(xí)方法；假如你是Mary，請(qǐng)給李華寫一封回信，要求包含以下內(nèi)容：
（1）要有自信心；
（2）多背誦；
（3）大量閱讀；
（4）多練習(xí)．
要求：
（1）根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（3）詞數(shù)100字左右．
Dear Li Hua，
I have received your letter and learned about your problem．Indeed，many students find it a great challenge to get used to senior English learning．So don't be nervous，I will give you some tips，which I hope will be of great help to you．（高分句型一）
To begin with，don't lose heart．Confidence plays an important role in English learning．（要有自信心）Besides，try to learn something useful by heart as possibly as you can，such as some set phrases，sentence structures，and some beautiful passages where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions．（高分句型二）（多背誦）And in your free time，you'd better read much，which will contribute to building up your vocabulary and help to better your reading and writing．（高分句型三）（大量閱讀）What's more，practice is an effective way．As we all know，practice makes perfect．You can have a try without delay．Practise your listening，speaking，reading and writing as often as possible．（多練習(xí)）
I hope you can follow these suggestions and make progress．
Yours，
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給李華寫一封回信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：要有自信心；多背誦；大量閱讀；多練習(xí)． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：get used to 適應(yīng)；be of great help 非常有幫助；To begin with首先；lose heart灰心喪氣；Besides另外；What's more而且；without delay毫不耽擱；as…as possible盡可能…；make progress取得進(jìn)步

解答 Dear Li Hua，
     I have received your letter and learned about your problem．Indeed，many students find it a great challenge to get used to senior English learning．So don't be nervous，I will give you some tips，which I hope will be of great help to you．（高分句型一）
    To begin with，don't lose heart．Confidence plays an important role in English learning．（要有自信心）Besides，try to learn something useful by heart as possibly as you can，such as some set phrases，sentence structures，and some beautiful passages where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions．（高分句型二）（多背誦）And in your free time，you'd better read much，which will contribute to building up your vocabulary and help to better your reading and writing．（高分句型三）（大量閱讀）What's more，practice is an effective way．As we all know，practice makes perfect．You can have a try without delay．Practise your listening，speaking，reading and writing as often as possible．（多練習(xí)）
     I hope you can follow these suggestions and make progress．
                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                              Mary

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．