假設(shè)你是李華,看到某中學(xué)生報(bào)的"熱點(diǎn)話題"專欄討論的主題是"對(duì)待父母的過(guò)度呵護(hù)我們應(yīng)該怎么辦",請(qǐng)你就此話題發(fā)表一下自己的觀點(diǎn).請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該專欄的編輯寫(xiě)一封信,發(fā)表你的個(gè)人意見(jiàn).

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn): 1.非常感激父母對(duì)我的愛(ài)；2.與父母交流自己的真實(shí)感受:自己長(zhǎng)大了,能處理自己的事情；3.相信父母會(huì)更理智地愛(ài)我.

注意:1.信的開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2.詞數(shù):110左右.

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children. So it is with my parents. I really feel lucky that I have such kind parents. And I deeply appreciate their love for me.

However, I have to admit sometimes they show me so much love that I feel uneasy with them. I think I am old enough to handle my personal affairs. At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely. I will tell them I am old enough to deal with some of my own matters on my own. I’ll let them know what I need is their belief in me and their support. I believe my parents will finally understand me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一封書(shū)信寫(xiě)作。主要圍繞對(duì)待父母的過(guò)度呵護(hù)我們應(yīng)該怎么辦發(fā)表自己的看法，文中已經(jīng)給定寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，注意要包括所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)加入自己的觀點(diǎn)。

本文第二句So it is with my parents.就使用了so it is with….某某也是一樣，這個(gè)句型；第二段第一句I have to admit sometimes they show me so much love that I feel uneasy with them.賓語(yǔ)從句中又包含一個(gè)so…that句式；第二段倒數(shù)第二句I’ll let them know what I need is their belief in me and their support.包含兩層句式，第一層是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句，第二層是what領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句。在短語(yǔ)使用上，使用了instead of代替，would like to想要，on my own.靠我自己等許多較好的短語(yǔ)。此外在詞語(yǔ)使用上也十分有亮點(diǎn)，如文中使用較多副詞，第一段最后一句中And I deeply appreciate their love for me.使用了deeply表達(dá)了作者對(duì)父母深深的感激，第二段第四句I’d like to talk with them openly and politely.使用了兩個(gè)副詞，表達(dá)了作者想同父母好好交談一次的愿望，副詞的運(yùn)用使得文章十分有感情，有深意，成為本文一大亮點(diǎn)�？偨Y(jié)：在題目給定大致內(nèi)容時(shí)注意不要遺漏題目觀點(diǎn)，以及適當(dāng)加入自己觀點(diǎn)，但不能過(guò)于贅述，保持字?jǐn)?shù)。

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