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5．最近，你校學(xué)生就是否應(yīng)該舉辦各種文藝匯演活動(dòng)進(jìn)行了討論并分別有不同的看法．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹相關(guān)情況并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．

部分同學(xué)贊成	1．可以豐富課余生活，緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力； 2．可以加深同學(xué)之間的了解，同時(shí)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生各方面的能力； 3．可以展示自我，贏得尊重．
部分同學(xué)反對(duì)	1．排練浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，影響學(xué)業(yè)； 2．節(jié)目有限，表演人數(shù)少； 3．活動(dòng)結(jié)束后，產(chǎn)生垃圾多．
你的觀點(diǎn)	…（至少兩點(diǎn)）

注意：
1．文章的開頭已給出，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)：120詞左右（不包括已給開頭）；
3．文中不得提及本人的相關(guān)信息．
4．參考詞匯：緩解relieve（v．）排練rehearse（v．）表演 performance（n．）
Students in our school have held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to hold parties to celebrate different festivals．Opinions vary from person to person．Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．（高分句型1）Besides，not only does holding activities help them know each other better but it improves their abilities．What's more，some can display themselves and earn respect．（贊成及其原因）
However，some students hold a different view．Firstly，it will take a lot of time to rehearse，which affects their study．Secondly，the list of performance is limited and only a small number of students have the opportunity to take part in it．Thirdly，a lot of waste is produced after the activity，which is harmful to the environment．（反對(duì)及其原因）
Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．（高分句型2）At the same time，our classmates may have a really great time by enjoying my performance．（作者的看法及原因）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇議論文，要根據(jù)三點(diǎn)要求來完成，分別是 1．引出主題；2．不同同學(xué)的看法及其原因：可以豐富課余生活，緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力；可以加深同學(xué)之間的了解，同時(shí)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生各方面的能力；可以展示自我，贏得尊重；3．你的觀點(diǎn)及原因．寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、寫作內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏；2、要注意時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)，避免出現(xiàn)語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤；3、適當(dāng)運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和句型來為自己的文章增色．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和詞匯為文章增色不少，比如1、熱點(diǎn)話題：a heated discussion  2、釋放學(xué)習(xí)壓力relieve some study pressure等．還運(yùn)用了一些從句使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)合理，如Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．和 Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．是非限制定語從句，也是一句長(zhǎng)句等．

解答 Students in our school have held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to hold parties to celebrate different festivals．Opinions vary from person to person．（引出主題）
Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．（高分句型1）Besides，not only does holding activities help them know each other better but it improves their abilities．What's more，some can display themselves and earn respect．（贊成及其原因）
However，some students hold a different view．Firstly，it will take a lot of time to rehearse，which affects their study．Secondly，the list of performance is limited and only a small number of students have the opportunity to take part in it．Thirdly，a lot of waste is produced after the activity，which is harmful to the environment．（反對(duì)及其原因）
Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．（高分句型2）At the same time，our classmates may have a really great time by enjoying my performance．（作者的看法及原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需要積累短語和重要句型．