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5．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞． 刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
   Ladies and gentlemen，
     Welcome to our school．Now I would like introduce our net-school to you．
     Our net-school is very helpfully in many ways．First，it makes both teaching and learning easier and much interesting．Students can get more knowledges in class．Whoever have a computer can have the lessons we give at home．Second，it's accessible for both teachers and students．We can make good use of the Internet，sending e-mails，searching for any information what we need etc．Third，the net also helps improve our school management but meet the needs of the modern education．Fourth，as a key school in our city，it sets a good example to the newly-built schools and may be of some help to it．
    That's all!Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是對(duì)學(xué)校新建的網(wǎng)校的介紹．
首先，網(wǎng)�？梢宰尷蠋煹慕虒W(xué)和學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)更容易和更有趣；在家里也可以學(xué)習(xí)；我們可以利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)來收發(fā)郵件搜索信息等等；同時(shí)網(wǎng)絡(luò)也有助于改善我們的學(xué)校管理；最后，作為我市的重點(diǎn)學(xué)校，也可以給其他的學(xué)校做好榜樣．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
     Welcome to our school．Now I would like∧introduce our net-school to you．
     Our net-school is very helpfully in many ways．First，it makes both teaching and learning easier andmuchinteresting．Students can get more knowledges in class．Whoeverhavea computer can have the lessons we give at home．Second，it's accessible forboth teachers and students．We can make good use of the Internet，sending e-mails，searching for any information  what we need etc．Third，the net also helps improve our school management but meet the needs of the modern education．Fourth，as a key school in our city，it sets a good example to the newly-built schools and may be of some help toit．
    That's all!Thank you．
解析：
1．would like后加to．考查固定句式． would like to do sth表示"想要做某事"．
2．helpfully改為helpful．考查形容詞和副詞．做表語用形容詞helpful．
3．much改為more．考查比較級(jí)．和 easier 相并列用interesting的比較級(jí)，所以把much改為more或者much后加more．
4．knowledges 改為 knowledge．考查名詞．knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞，所以去掉s．
5．have改為has．考查主謂一致．Whoever做主語時(shí)謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)．
6．for改為to．考查介詞．be accessible to sb表示"對(duì)于某人是可以接觸的"．
7．去掉what或把what換成that．在searching for any information what we need中，we need是searching for any information 的定語從句，缺少賓語，先行詞是any information，所以去掉what或把what換成that．
8．but改為and．考查連詞．根據(jù)helps improve our school management 和 meet the needs of the modern education的句義可知兩句之間是并列關(guān)系，所以用and．
9．needs改為need．考查名詞．need在本句中是不可數(shù)名詞，泛指現(xiàn)代教育的需要．
10it改為them．考查代詞．根據(jù)it sets a good example to the newly-built schools可知本句用them代指the newly-built schools．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
多音節(jié)形容詞的比較級(jí)．三音節(jié)或多于三音節(jié)的形容詞，其比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)通常采用分析式，即在原級(jí)之前加more和most的形式，例如
instructive more instructive most instructive
beautiful more beautiful most beautiful
difficult more difficult most difficult