Question

15．假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，你的母校�？�編輯邀請你給初三的同學(xué)寫一封公開信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．你在高三的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況；
2．你對英語學(xué)習(xí)意義的認(rèn)識(shí)；
3．你對初三同學(xué)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議．
注意：1．內(nèi)容包括以上要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，文章開頭已提供，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
 Dear fellow students：
I'd like to share with you some of my thoughts．                                                                         
                                                                                    

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的母校校刊編輯邀請你給初三的同學(xué)寫一封公開信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：你在高三的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況；你對英語學(xué)習(xí)意義的認(rèn)識(shí)；你對初三同學(xué)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：make progress取得進(jìn)步；Meanwhile同時(shí)；in order to以便，為了；lead to 導(dǎo)致；play a vital role in 在…方面起關(guān)鍵作用；make use of 充分利用；as for至于，關(guān)于；form a habit of形成一個(gè)…的習(xí)慣；take advantage of 利用；Besides另外；focus on專注于；
Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I made great progress after a full devotion to my study．（高分句型一） Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）
As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear fellows，
       I am really glad to share my thoughts with you．Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I made great progress after a full devotion to my study．（高分句型一） Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）
      A good command of English plays a vital role in the coming exam as well as the future study．Making more use of the knowledge makes you a better informed person．As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三） Besides，focus on mistakes，and consult your teachers in time．
      Best wishes for all of you．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．