Question

假如你是美國(guó)的Mike，你的朋友張平打算到國(guó)外留學(xué)，他寫(xiě)信詢問(wèn)你什么樣的中國(guó)學(xué)生最受國(guó)外高校青睞。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對(duì)方寫(xiě)一封回信：
1. 語(yǔ)言能力是基礎(chǔ)
2. 適應(yīng)能力很重要
3. 興趣愛(ài)好被看重
4. 要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感
注意：詞數(shù)100左右。
Dear Zhang Ping,
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Yours,
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Ping,
I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.
As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.
This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.
Yours，
Mike

試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信，屬于提綱類作文。文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的中文提示，給學(xué)生留下了很大自由發(fā)揮的空間，有益于考查考生的能力。成文時(shí)要注意：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全；（1）語(yǔ)言能力是基礎(chǔ)；（2）適應(yīng)能力很重要；（3）興趣愛(ài)好被看重；（4）要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感。2.時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3.人稱：以第一人稱為主；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)及高級(jí)句式，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章流暢，自然。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用從句高級(jí)句型：As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed. 使用連詞和插入語(yǔ)：As far as I know, Besides, What’s more, Last but not the least,高級(jí)詞匯：essential，responsibility等。