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17．隨著中西文化交流的不斷加強，西方的一些習俗也被引入中國，越來越多的年輕人熱衷于在圣誕節(jié)那天以各種形式慶祝這一西方的節(jié)日．請你就《圣誕節(jié)將會取代春節(jié)嗎？》為題目，寫一篇英語短文．
寫作要點：1）中國人慶祝圣誕的現(xiàn)狀；
2）圣誕節(jié)是否會取代春節(jié)及其原因；
3）你的看法．
注意：1）短文詞數(shù)120詞左右；      2）開頭部分已寫好，不計入總次數(shù)．
Will Christmas Replace the Spring Festival？
Christmas arouse increasing attention year by year in China．
                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關于圣誕節(jié)將會取代春節(jié)話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內容包括：一中國人慶祝圣誕的現(xiàn)狀；二圣誕節(jié)是否會取代春節(jié)及其原因；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．One reason lies in the fact that Christmas only affects Christians，college students and joint-venture workers．句子里lies in 表示"存在于"；that 引導同位語從句，介紹the fact 的內容．
一個原因是這個事實，圣誕節(jié)只是影響基督徒，大學生以及合資企業(yè)的員工．
2．I think it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the West，a lot of Western holidays have been gradually introduced into China．句子里it 做形式主語，代指that 從句；have been gradually introduced 事現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)的被動，表示"已經(jīng)被引入"．
我認為，隨著中西方交流的增加，很多西方的節(jié)日被引入中國是很自然的．

解答 Will Christmas Replace the Spring Festival？
    Christmas arouses increasing attention year by year in China．Christmas cards become popular with students．People hold Christmas parties and exchange Christmas gifts．A lot of programs about Christmas are on the TV and radio．Meanwhile，the Spring Festival is less appealing to youngsters．Thus some people wonder whether Christmas will replace the Spring Festival．（中國人慶祝圣誕的現(xiàn)狀）
     This worry is fairly unnecessary．One reason lies in the fact that Christmas only affects Christians，college students and joint-venture workers．【高分句型一】Another reason is that Christmas is mostly celebrated in cities．Few people in countryside show extreme interest in this exotic festival．By contrast，the Spring Festival is the most influential traditional festival in every family．（圣誕節(jié)是否會取代春節(jié)及其原因）
     I think it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the West，a lot of Western holidays have been gradually introduced into China．【高分句型二】For us Chinese we should never neglect or even discard our own traditional festivals．For centuries Chinese have observed this traditional holiday to welcome the beginning of a new year．And we should treasure the Spring Festival forever．（自己的看法）

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