Question

請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，
某英語報(bào)社舉辦“ I like music”的征文比賽，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
1音樂教會(huì)我學(xué)會(huì)欣賞2音樂充實(shí)我的生活；3音樂幫助我放松
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢3參考詞匯：充實(shí)enrich

Answer 1

Why I like music
My greatest hobby is listening to music. Now let me tell you why I like music so much. First of all , as an important from of art, music  teaches me what is good  and beautiful, and it helps me learn to enjoy the beauty. Secondly, music enriches my life . With an MP3player, I can listen to music wherever I go , which makes my life more colorful. Thirdly, music helps me feel relaxed. Wherever I feel the pressure, I turn to music to relax myself. In a word, music does a lot of good to me and I like it more and more.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。