假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?

I have something important to tell you. Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain. Now I will introduce their plan for today. we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning. A school has a history of 85 years. Then we’ll go to an exhibition of some new invention. I think it will be interested. The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel. We’ll set out at 8:30. Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time. You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions. Thank you for listening.

1.加上be

2.加上 of

3.their--our

4.would--will

5.去掉on

6.A--The

7.invention--inventions

8.interested--interesting

9.Taking--Take

10.unless--if

【解析】

試題分析：

1.文中第二段第二句�？疾楸粍诱Z態(tài)的用法。本句句意為：我們?nèi)ムl(xiāng)村參觀的計劃由于下雨不得不推遲到明天。計劃和推遲之間存在被動關(guān)系，故需要使用被動語態(tài)。不定式的被動語態(tài)在其后加上be就可以了，故在to之后加上be。

2.文中第二段第二句。考查because和because of之間的區(qū)別。雖然兩者都可以表示因為，但是用法卻不同。because之后加上表原因的分句而because of之后加上表原因的名詞或動名詞。此句中表原因的是名詞the rain，故需要使用的是because of，所以加上of。

3.文中第二段第三句。通過上一句可知，此處講的是our plan，故把their改成our。句意為：現(xiàn)在我介紹一下我們今天的計劃。

4.文中第二段第四句。通過上文Now I will introduce their plan for today.可知介紹的是即將發(fā)生的事情，故用現(xiàn)在將來時而不是過去將來時。所以把would改成will。

5.文中第二段第四句。本句考查時間狀語的用法。句意為：今天早晨我們將坐公共汽車去參觀一所學(xué)校。今天早晨作時間狀語不需要加介詞，故去掉on。

6.文中第二段第五句。此處所指的學(xué)校是上文提到的學(xué)校。在英語中，表上文剛剛提到的可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，需要用定冠詞the，故把a(bǔ)改成the，注意首字母大寫。

7.文中第二段第六句。此處考查可數(shù)名詞的用法。Invention為可數(shù)名詞，它的前面有some修飾，表一些，所以需要用invention的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故改成inventions。

8.文中第二段第七句。此處考查interesting和interested的區(qū)別，前者意為有趣的；后者意為感到有意思的。根據(jù)句意：我認(rèn)為那是很有趣的。故把interested改成interesting。

9.文中倒數(shù)第三句。本句考查祈使句。祈使句需要用動詞原形開始，故把taking改成take，句意為：請隨身攜帶所有的必需品，準(zhǔn)時上車。注意首字母大寫。

10.文中倒數(shù)第二句。本句考查條件句。根據(jù)意思是指：如果有問題，歡迎來問我，而不是除非有問題，歡迎來問我。故把unless改成if，表如果。

考點(diǎn):考查短文糾錯

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