Question

【題目】書面表達（滿分25分）

假設你是李華，David是你的美國網(wǎng)友。他對目前中國出現(xiàn)的霧霾天氣很關(guān)注，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.感謝他的關(guān)注。

2.簡介霧霾 (smog）天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害。

3.談談你保護環(huán)境的感想。

注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢；

開頭與結(jié)尾已寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)；

詞數(shù)：100左右

Dear David，

I'm glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to use environmentally friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:考查半開放性作文。本文的話題是中國的霧霾。霧霾可以給有呼吸道疾病的人帶來生命危險，引起咳嗽，肺癌等。對交通也有很大的影響，能見度低，導致交通事故。在個人感想方面可以從提高人民對于環(huán)境保護的意識，多使用健康環(huán)保的產(chǎn)品等方面詳細展開。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語be concerned about 關(guān)心；be worried about擔憂；such as 例如；hear from收到某人來信；mak a difference 有影響； As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection這個句子as引導非限制性定語從句；So we should do what we can to make a difference.這個句子what we can 是do 的賓語從句；Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.這個句子only+狀語，主句用部分倒裝 ；