Question

11．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，為英語校報(bào)寫一篇稿件，介紹你（李華）參加班級(jí)組織的徒步活動(dòng)的情況．
介紹活動(dòng)主要經(jīng)過；
參加這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的感受（享受大自然，強(qiáng)身健體，學(xué)會(huì)互助，放松心情，利于學(xué)習(xí)）
要求：1）句子結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
2）字?jǐn)?shù)100個(gè)字左右．開頭已給出
Last Sunday，we went hiking．Early in the morning．we gathered at the school gate at 6 and headed for theSunshine Mountain．Our goal was to reach the top，so we could see the beautiful view．The hike was exhausting and the heat drained our energy．When we finally reached our destination，the whole view was breathtaking．
It was well worth the extra effort because we not onlygot relaxed by enjoying the beauty of nature but also we learned how to smoothaway difficulties，help each other as well as build ourbodies．
In the near future，we each will have our own mountain toclimb．Let's go forward and set a greater goal and aim at ahigher top of the mountain in our life．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一篇稿件，介紹你參加班級(jí)組織的徒步活動(dòng)的情況．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：介紹活動(dòng)主要經(jīng)過；參加這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的感受（享受大自然，強(qiáng)身健體，學(xué)會(huì)互助，放松心情，利于學(xué)習(xí)）．寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：at the school gate （在校門口），headed for sp （前往某處），drain one's energy（耗盡某人的精力），be well worth…（很值得…），smooth away difficulties （消除困難）．

解答 Early in the morning，we gathered at the school gate at 6 and headed for theSunshine Mountain．Our goal was to reach the top，so we could see the beautiful view．【高分句型】The hikewas exhausting and the heat drained our energy．When wefinally reached our destination，the wholeview was breathtaking．（活動(dòng)的經(jīng)過）
It was well worth theextra effort because we not only got relaxed by enjoying the beauty of naturebut also we learned how to smooth away difficulties，help each other as well as build our bodies．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)的感受：享受大自然，強(qiáng)身健體，學(xué)會(huì)互助，放松心情，有利于學(xué)習(xí)）
        In the near future，we each will have our own mountain toclimb．Let's go forward and set a greater goal and aim at ahigher top of the mountain in our life．（結(jié)尾---總結(jié)概括）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．