Question

【題目】請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

A Chinese boy is reported to have spent about 2 million yuan in studying in New Zealand but failed to get any diploma. He even could not take care of himself and his grandmother had to feed him.

The man in the case is a so-called adult baby, because his deeds make him almost the same as a baby. He cannot take care of himself. He is unable to go to school, let alone finish studies.He even relies on his grandmother to feed him.

However, he burns money faster than any normal student. He spent about 2 million yuan in two years overseas, but could not finish even the preparatory courses. We do not mean to judge his choice，but someone who lacks the basic ability to survive has little chance of success in any modern society.

In a later interview, the mother of the boy was in tears and said she regretted not having taught her son well.She also told the story about how she “educated” her son: meeting all his demands, even the unreasonable ones.When he did not perform well in school, she simply spent money in sending him overseas; she would buy whatever he wanted.That was bad for her and bad for him.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 以約30個單詞概括文章大意；

2. 談?wù)勀闳绾慰创�”巨嬰”現(xiàn)象，然后用2～3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整、語言規(guī)范、語篇連貫、詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】A Chinese boy consumed a large sum of money in two years overseas. What's worse, he couldn't live on himself and didn't get a diploma eventually.

The phenomenon sets me thinking. The boy depicted in the passage is not the single case, resulting from several factors. First and foremost, there exist some parents spoiling the young and giving whatever their children want, even though their demands are irrational occasionally. In the second place, some parents focus more on children's academic performances, ignoring the education of survival skills. Last but not least, some young people are self-centered and take it for granted that others serve them.

From where I stand, it's high time that we took some measures to cope with this problem. To begin with, parents should strike a balance between discipline and love, letting their children try something themselves. Additionally, the young should establish proper values and communicate more with others.

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，要求寫一篇議論文； 要求為：1. 以約30個單詞概括文章大意；2. 談?wù)勀闳绾慰创�“巨嬰”現(xiàn)象，然后用2～3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如： single case個別案例；First and foremost首要的是；irrational不合理的；academic performances學(xué)校表現(xiàn)；education of survival skills生存技能教育；Last but not least最后也是最重要的；self-centered自我中心的；take it for granted理所當(dāng)然；cope with處理；establish proper values樹立合適的價值觀。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。