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【題目】隨著高考的臨近，部分住校生要求搬出學(xué)生宿舍，在學(xué)校附近租房子住。請你根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，闡述學(xué)生和家長的觀點，并表達自己的看法。

現(xiàn)象 高三部分住校生搬離學(xué)生宿舍，在學(xué)校附近租房住 觀點 多數(shù)學(xué)生 1.宿舍吵鬧，影響學(xué)習(xí)和休息2.熄燈制度限定了學(xué)習(xí)時間 許多家長 1．提供好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境2．方便照顧飲食起居 你的看法 ……

注意： 1．陳述所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2．詞數(shù)120—150（開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

3．參考詞匯：熄燈制度—blackout rule

With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools.

Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship, the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesn't leave them enough time to finish homework．Worse still, the noise in the dorms not only influences their studies but also ruins their rest．To many parents, they'd like to provide a better environment for their children so that they can study more efficiently．Besides, they can take care of their children's daily meals and laundry, so their children can eat better and have a comfortable life．

In my opinion, whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need．I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study．After all, time is pressing．But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school．

【解析】

試題分析：

本篇書面表達屬于議論文類寫作，根據(jù)提示信息要求來展開。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。本文要求就高三學(xué)生在臨近畢業(yè)時是否應(yīng)該在校外租房一事，說明多數(shù)學(xué)生以及家長的看法，還有你的觀點；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文應(yīng)該分三部分：高三部分住校生在校外租房的現(xiàn)象；他們及其家長的看法；你的看法。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)和人稱。本文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，以主動語態(tài)為主，第三人稱說明學(xué)生及家長的看法和第一人稱表明自己對此事的觀點； 要靈活運用各種短語和從句來豐富文章的內(nèi)容。

式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句和recommend后的從句謂語用should加動詞原形表建議。 此外，文章還使用了大量短語not only ... but also, depends on, in favor of，for the sake of 等。插入語Worse still，Besides，In my opinion，After all和so, but, while的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。