Question

【題目】【原創(chuàng)】最近，你班就高考后的暑假打算展開了一次討論。有的想打工掙錢以便繼續(xù)到大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)；有的打算學(xué)習(xí)一門技術(shù)去掙錢養(yǎng)家；有的想和同學(xué)一起去旅游。你想在家陪家人呆2周放松身心，然后去自己喜歡的上海去看看，以便選擇一個(gè)喜歡的大學(xué)在那里繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。這個(gè)暑假對(duì)大多數(shù)同學(xué)而言就意味著新生活的開始。

要求：1. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息;

3. 詞數(shù): 120個(gè)左右。

We’re going to finish our middle school in June after the important College Entrance Examination. Recently, our class has a heat discussion on what to do in this real summer holiday.

Answer 1

【答案】

We’re going to finish our middle school in June after the important College Entrance Examination. Recently, our class has a heat discussion on what to do in this real summer holiday. With no stress on study, we can do anything we dream of all the time. Some want to do temporary jobs to earn money for college study. Some would like to learn some kinds of skills, like a hairstyle designer, a cook, a driver etc. so that they can have a better job. Some students are going to visit some places of interest. As for me, I’d love to stay at home with my family for two weeks, doing nothing but sleep and relax. Then I plan to visit some universities in Shanghai so as to go on my further education there. This summer means a new beginning to many middle students. Therefore, all of us are looking forward to its coming.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇話題作文，首先要說(shuō)明班會(huì)討論的結(jié)果，高考后的暑假計(jì)劃。提筆前要考慮以下幾個(gè)方面：1. 時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主 ；2.人稱：用第一或第三人稱。3.可以合理想象，注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文運(yùn)用了一些較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，如temporary jobs，As for me ，doing nothing but等；還有定語(yǔ)從句anything we dream of all the time，和so that 句式等。